In this part of the IELTS test, you will be asked to write a letter in response to a given situation. This letter could be personal, semi-formal, or formal, depending on the context. Choosing the right tone is very important.
Your writing will be assessed based on four equally weighted criteria:
While Task 1 is important, remember that Task 2 carries more weight in your overall Writing score.
You will have 20 minutes to complete this task, and you should aim for at least 150 words in your letter. So, managing your time wisely is key!
Let’s get into a sample task so you can see exactly what’s expected.
You are going on a business trip for a week and you need someone to look after your house and your plants. A friend has agreed to help you out.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
Before we look at example responses, let’s first understand how to approach this task carefully.
By following this structured approach, you’ll be able to write a clear, detailed letter that meets the task requirements.
Let’s first look at a response that scored Band 6. As you read, pay attention to the clarity and level of detail.
Dear Eric,
I hope you are doing well! As you know, I will be away on a business trip for a week, and I am very grateful that you have agreed to look after my house and plants. I’ve written down a few instructions to make things easier for you.
First, in case of any emergency, you can reach me at my mobile number: 937-891-3331. Alternatively, you can email me at lgraham@yahoo.com if you need anything. If something urgent happens at home, don’t hesitate to contact the neighbor, Ben at 937-552-7791.
For the plants, please water them every two days. The potted plants in the living room need a little more water, so make sure they are well hydrated. The ones in the garden should be fine with a little less water, but still check them regularly. Just make sure not to overwater, as that can be harmful.
In terms of house tasks, could you please bring in the mail every day and check that all windows are closed in the evening? I also have a few packages arriving on Tuesday, so it would be great if you could sign for them if I’m not home. Other than that, everything else should be fine, but let me know if you have any questions.
Thanks again for helping out. I really appreciate it!
Best regards,
Henry
Now, let’s read a Band 9 response. Notice the vocabulary, structure, and how naturally the ideas flow.
Dear Ruth,
I hope this message finds you well. Thank you so much for agreeing to look after my house and plants while I am away on my business trip next week. I truly appreciate your help, and I have outlined a few important details to make the process as smooth as possible.
In case of any emergencies, please do not hesitate to reach out to me directly on my mobile at 937-891-3331. Alternatively, you can email me at edith.lampard@yahoo.com for non-urgent matters. Additionally, if you are unable to reach me, Ben, my neighbor, will be available to assist. His number is 937-552-7791.
For the plants, I kindly ask that you water them every two days. The ones in the living room tend to dry out faster, so please give them a bit more water, ensuring the soil is moist but not overly saturated. For the garden plants, a lighter watering should suffice, but do keep an eye on them, particularly if the weather is warm. If you’re unsure about any of them, feel free to reach out.
As for the house, it would be great if you could bring in the mail daily and ensure that all windows are securely closed in the evenings. I am also expecting a couple of packages to arrive on Tuesday, so your help in signing for them would be greatly appreciated. Beyond that, everything else should be straightforward, but please let me know if you encounter any issues or have any questions.
Thank you once again for your kindness and support. I feel much more at ease knowing that everything is in your capable hands.
Best regards,
Edith
Even though Band 6 and Band 9 are scored differently, both responses share some positive features:
| Aspect | Band 6 | Band 9 | Why Band 9 Scores Higher |
|---|---|---|---|
| Coherence & Cohesion | Transitions are adequate but slightly abrupt in places. | Smooth, natural flow with skillful transitions. | Band 9 responses have a seamless flow of ideas. They use linking words and phrases naturally — such as “In case of emergency,” “For the plants,” and “As for the house” — making the writing feel smooth and connected. In Band 6, the transitions work but can feel a bit mechanical or abrupt, which interrupts the reading flow. |
| Lexical Resource | Adequate range, but some repetition and imprecision. | Wide range, precise and natural word choices. | Band 9 letters use richer and more precise vocabulary. Instead of repeating words like “water” or “check,” they vary their language — for example, using “ensure the soil is moist” or “bring in the mail daily.” Band 6 responses show a good effort but often repeat simple phrases and have minor awkward word choices that slightly weaken the writing. |
| Grammatical Range & Accuracy | Mix of simple and complex sentences; some errors. | High flexibility with minimal errors. | Band 9 responses use a variety of sentence structures — simple, compound, complex — all with accurate grammar. For example, “If you’re unsure about any of them, feel free to reach out” is a well-formed complex sentence. Band 6 uses a mix too, but sometimes the sentences are awkward or contain small mistakes, such as missing commas or slight tense errors. |
| Task Achievement | Covers bullet points, but some details are vague. | Covers bullet points with great detail and clarity. | Band 9 writers fully develop each point. They don’t just mention watering plants; they specify how often, how much, and what signs to look for (like “yellowing leaves”). This level of detail ensures that the reader understands exactly what to do, leaving no confusion. Band 6 responses sometimes give instructions but in a more general way, without enough supporting details. |
| Punctuation & Clarity | Occasional minor errors. | Highly clear with minimal errors. | Band 9 responses use precise punctuation to guide the reader easily through the text. Commas, full stops, and paragraph breaks are used exactly where they should be. In Band 6, small punctuation mistakes, like missing commas or long sentences without breaks, make the letter slightly harder to read. |
While both letters meet the basic requirements, the Band 9 response is much more polished and advanced. Let’s break it down clearly:
In simple terms, the Band 9 writer shows stronger control over language, structure, and tone. This level of precision and clarity is exactly what examiners are looking for when awarding high scores.
Take a moment to reflect:
Remember, becoming a stronger writer is about practice and attention to detail. With consistent effort, you can definitely reach your target score!